Test feedback

WWW:

Some seriously impressive detail and some excellent points, especially early on.

EBI:

Editing is a weakness; most of your answer refers to camera work or sound. Remember pace, transitions. Slow motion etc. is what you are looking for.

Some good notes but more, and more organised will help you.

A big one? PARAGRAPHS. It’s very difficult to separate your points and that will cost you.

L/R: To improve I need to focus on improving drastically on editing  and on making more detailed and organised notes.